Don't sell yourself short just because it wasn't "composed" or "professional" or some such crap. You've captured a relevant moment, a feeling of ennui and inertia and a mood of alienation. There are so many contrasts: the fonts and colors tell us "this is fun" yet it feels gloomy; the momentum of the woman with the bags and the inertia of the customers; the Victorian background and the ugly "pole-barn" storefront architecture; even the openness of the restaurant and the "for lease" signs next door are telling. Everything is a clue.

For fun I thought I'd run it through a three-minute photoshopping session to see if it changes the way we perceive the photo: http://bit.ly/JonBell_retouch

There are over 10 BILLION images on Google Images, and yet here you are, snapping a moment somewhere across the world in Wellington. You've already reached a few hundred people (or more?) with your single click. I say keep at it!!